Check this verse.......?

Good lyricism for the most part. It all depends on your flow, like the first 3 lines all rhyme the word vibe so I ume you already know how it's sounds out loud. The only problems are certain lines, I don't like the line a "wise look in these eyes would have u dashing". It just doesn't work. Same with "endeavor to stay locked up never". That's not something someone would say and lyrics are more important than the actual rhymes(unless u want to sound stupid like lil Wayne). But other wise good